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Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids: Revising Your Story (Episode 6)

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Pink background with title text that reads, "Episode 6: Revising" over a graphic of a woman with a ponytail and a graphic of a yellow pencil writing on a page that reads, ""Oh no!' Mary said." The word "said" is crossed out and replaced with "cried."

This episode helps students learn how to revise their stories to make them even better. Students need to revise their stories for clarity and meaning. Part of the "Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids" series.

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Runtime: 3 minutes 51 seconds

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Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids
Episode 1
1 minutes 38 seconds
Grade Level: 3 - 6
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Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids
Episode 2
2 minutes 17 seconds
Grade Level: 3 - 6
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Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids
Episode 3
2 minutes
Grade Level: 3 - 6
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Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids
Episode 4
2 minutes 29 seconds
Grade Level: 3 - 6
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Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids
Episode 5
1 minutes 56 seconds
Grade Level: 3 - 6
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Pink background with title text that reads, "Episode 6: Revising" over a graphic of a woman with a ponytail and a graphic of a yellow pencil writing on a page that reads, ""Oh no!' Mary said." The word "said" is crossed out and replaced with "cried."
Realistic Fiction Writing for Kids
Episode 6
3 minutes 51 seconds
Grade Level: 3 - 6
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